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Details my NaNoWriMo insanity for 2007 & back issues highlight 2006. Moved to a new location on LiveJournal for 2008.

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My NaNoWriMo Blog for 2008 and beyond will be at LiveJournal since Yahoo has abandoned 360.


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Tuesday November 4, 2008 - 01:35pm (EST) Permanent Link | 0 Comments
Finished in more ways than one
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I've uploaded and verified my novel. Yay.
My dad died yesterday. Boo.
My word count might go up after Thursday's write in, but not by much.

There is now a blog for people in CT doing NaNo, so we can keep in touch all year: http://ctwrimos.blogspot.com
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Tuesday November 27, 2007 - 07:56am (EST) Permanent Link | 0 Comments
35 K & counting, plus not for kids excerpt
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Here is more about Greg (Gluttony). He killed the woman he met in the last excerpt while raping her, although he doesn't think of it that way.
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And he had never cleaned his truck. Her DNA could be in it.

Greg grabbed a small trash bag and a box of Arm and Hammer headed outside. He felt under the seat, behind the cushions, everywhere. No keys. He tossed empty frito’s bags, empty soda cans, empty beer cans, napkins, big mac wrappers, and a few moldy French fries into the bag. He really was a slob.

With great difficulty, he took the hinged top off the bed of his truck and leaned it against the house. It blocked one of the windows. His mother would have a cow. Greg didn’t care. He drove two towns over and took the truck through an automated car wash—the kind with no attendant to remember him—and hoped there were no surveillance cameras. He fed quarters into the vacuum machine and went over every inch of the upholstery and carpeting. He dusted everything with the Arm and Hammer baking soda and vacuumed again, just to be sure. The truck’s cab smelled strangely clean when he was finished. He didn’t like it.

On the way home, he stopped at Burger King and got a triple Whopper with bacon and cheese, a king sized fry, a king sized onion ring, a chocolate shake and a coke big enough to drown kittens in. Immediately his truck filled with the comforting smell of hot grease. He wolfed down the food, driving with one hand, and when his belly was full he felt much better.

Still one more thing to do. He stopped home and grabbed the clean laundry in the basket and another trash bag. His mother called something querulous about the truck cover blocking the window. He yelled back “I know, I’ll fix it” and lumbered back out to his truck. The drive home had covered its shiny cleanliness with dust and it looked much better. Really clean trucks were for pussies.

He drove leisurely toward the cabin. Yellow tape fluttered in the trees where Oh Susanna’s car had been abandoned. He forced himself to look, to slow down. Anyone would, right? Even though he didn’t see anyone else, he felt like he had an obligation to act a certain way. If he let his defenses down, he was screwed, screwed worse than poor Oh Susannah.

He passed one truck, heading back to town, an old-timer, his mom’s age. Probably one of her ex-boyfriends. He waved. The geezer waved. Greg pulled into his long driveway and tucked the trash bag under his coat. Then he felt stupid. He could bring trash bags to his cabin. Maybe he needed to spring clean.

There were the keys, in the corner by the recliner. He picked them up with the bag and turned the bag inside out, the same way he picked up dead rats. He tossed the clean blankets back onto the bed and put the rest of the hunting clothes, still in their laundry basket, in their place beside the bed. He’d gotten rid of the shirt whose sleeve he’d torn off in a different bar dumpster than her clothes. The sleeve he had dumped into the woods in a different spot than he’d left O Susannah. He wondered what she looked like after a week out there. Best not to think about that, and definitely best not to go there. That was how they got you, when you returned to the scene of the crime.

Well, technically, this cabin was the scene of the crime, and here he was, but they didn’t know that, did they? He was thinking the crime scene was her rotting body out there under the leaves and trash bags. A dog could find her, yeah, but no one brought their dogs into that area. Not good hunting around there.

Whistling a little, he stuck the bag with her keys into his pocket and left the cabin.

The truck tires crunched over the gravel as he rolled slowly toward the road, considering what to do with her keys. Throw them away as a unit? Take the ring apart and toss the keys away one by one? That seemed to be the best solution. Damn it, he should have dismantled the ring in the cabin. He thought about turning around—if anyone saw, he’d forgotten something—but then he saw an ominous sight.

A police car. Gator county sheriff.

Instead of going left out of the driveway and heading home, he turned right and headed deeper into the forest. ....
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excerpt copyright (c) 2007 Gevera Bert Piedmont

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Wednesday November 14, 2007 - 09:14pm (EST) Permanent Link | 0 Comments
23K & counting, plus plot ninjas
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I'm slow this year. My dad's failing quickly and it's consuming my time, as is my intense Java class. I should be nearly done and I'm not even halfway.

But I found this awesome ninja picture to brighten my day, and here is info on plot ninjas in general, courtesy of Burning Library :
These ideas are for guidance when your plot seems to have dried up on you. They force you to ask yourself questions, and the hope is that while explaining the random thing that just happened, you will unblock yourself and a torrent of words will ensue. They are intentionally vague enough to fit any genre and setting; it’s up to you to supply the details. 1. A character hears a sudden commotion.

2. A character receives a piece of correspondence, either with very good or very bad news.

3. Something valuable disappears.

4. A character is given an unwanted gift, which he or she must accept.

5. A personification of some aspect of a character's psyche talks to them (think Jiminy Cricket).

6. A character finds out a potentially life-ruining secret about someone he or she doesn't like.

7. A character is recognized in public by someone they don't recognize at all.

8. Someone says, "...and then me leg fell off."

9. There is a stampede of animals.

10. Suddenly, ninjas (or something plausible but equally improbable in your setting) spring in from every side.

(The photo is of the actual plot ninjas)
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Thursday November 8, 2007 - 01:58pm (EST) Permanent Link | 0 Comments
8K and counting, with excerpt (not for kids)
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I'm at 8110 words. I'm feeling a little slow and slodgy this year. It's day three, I should be at 15K. I hope I can catch up to myself this weekend.





Here's a different excerpt than what's on the NaNo site:

He followed her at a decent distance, figuring she’d take the main road (what was the number?) to one of the nearby towns, since he didn’t recognize her or any of her friends. But she didn’t. She actually was heading kind of towards his cabin. It was like fate.

He dropped back a little more, because there wasn’t much traffic along here. He wondered if she was lost. She had taken the second turn; she probably meant to take the one after. His gain.

Brownie’s car disappeared around a curve. Greg shifted in his seat. He could probably manage to reach under the wheel and push aside his panniculus and get to his hard-on but it would be too distracting.

He came around the corner and almost hit her. Her car was stopped, one wheel in the ditch beside the road. She was standing next to it, looking close to tears, staring at her cell phone.

It wouldn’t work out here. He knew that, from frequent visits to his cabin.

He stopped in front of her car and walked back. “Stuck in the ditch huh?” he said, and groaned. Here’s your sign.

Brownie looked up and her eyes widened. “You,” she said.

Greg played dumb. “Do I know you?” He looked at her, frowning.

“You were just at Chil-B-Q. I saw you.”

“Yeah, I was. I don’t remember you, though.”

Oh, stupid. He’d been staring at her. Now she knew he was a liar.

She took a step back.

He smiled. “I remember you. I’m kidding. You were with your two friends.”

Somehow that made it worse.

“Why did you say you didn’t remember me, then?” Clearly she was suspicious.

He put up his hands. He was harmless, really. As long as she didn’t notice the pole in his pants. “I felt funny, like you’d think I was stalking you.”

“Are you?” Her look was direct.

He laughed. “I live down this street. Do you? Maybe you’re stalking me.”

The joke fell flat.

“I’m lost, actually. I was trying to turn around—“ she indicated the stuck car. “And my cell phone’s got no reception out here.”

“I know,” he said with false sympathy. “I have a phone at my place; a regular phone.” And he did, because his mother had to be able to reach him. Most of the time he kept it unplugged.

Brownie stared at him without blinking.

“I can give you a ride there and you can use my phone to call for help. Triple A or whatever.” He smiled; it felt fake.

Her glaze flicked to his truck. “Can you pull me out with that thing?”

Thing? She’d called his truck a thing? “I haven’t got a winch.” He had friends with winches, of course. He could call one of them, once he plugged in the phone, and they’d have her out in a jiffy. He opened his mouth to offer, and thought better of it. The hot rod in his pants (the thought of the words “hot rod” in relationship to what was in his pants made him laugh) suggested slyly that there were other options. He found himself say, “you have triple a or something like that? On star?”

Her big mouth quirked a little. “On star? In that heap?”

The old Ford Escort she was driving was at least ten years old. He wouldn’t be surprised if the drop into the ditch was the last thing it ever did. He noticed the out of state plates. Not likely to be a repeat, then.

He looked at the vehicle a little closer. It did look like her axel was affected; the right front wheel didn’t seem to be at the correct angle, even taking into account the car being canted into the ditch.

“You got to call your folks?” Greg asked. The hot rod brain was making fearsome calculations. He shifted a little, tugging on his sweatpants’ pockets.

She shook her head. “No folks, not anymore. I was in town to meet some friends. I’m on my way south for vacation and I wanted to meet up with some friends from college.”

Older than she looked, then, unless she’d dropped out.

Greg smiled in his most non-threatening manner. “How about I drive you to my place, you call for help. Then I can drop you back here to wait. I can even wait with you if you don’t want to be alone.” He widened his eyes slightly, trying to look innocent.

Brownie looked unconvinced.

“My name is George, by the way,” he added, holding out his meaty hand.

She touched it with the tips of her fingers, not really shaking it. “Susanna,”

Instantly the refrain of that old song popped into his head,”Oh Susanna, don’t you cry for me”—but he did want her to cry, cry out from under him.

copyright by me, of course, not that it's worth stealing!


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Saturday November 3, 2007 - 03:47pm (EDT) Permanent Link | 0 Comments

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